Just A Simple Love Story
My background is in business writing, and I always wonder if I can write something else.
I stumbled across this lovely article at the following thread, and I try to write a different version of it. Hope you like it (or maybe I should stick to business writing, right?):
http://my.iciba.com/blog-2359574-160686.html
"Love between a younger boy and an older girl is like, well, the forbidden fruit – it’s somewhat tabooed yet electrifying when it comes to pass.
She never would have thought she could ever fall in love with a boy two years her junior, and yet fate has a way with the unthinkable.
He is as pure as the first dew of a spring dawn – so innocent, so lovely, and yet so fragile.
And when they hold hands and gaze into each other’s eyes, it seems the whole world is frozen in time like nothing else exists except the two of them struggling to perpetuate that enchanting moment into an eternity.
When they are together, she hates herself for betraying her own principle in seeking a younger lover. Yet when they are apart, she can think of nothing else except his sparkling eyes, sweet smiles and soft words.
It doesn’t matter if tomorrow holds no promises, and all that matters is the precious moments they share together."
I stumbled across this lovely article at the following thread, and I try to write a different version of it. Hope you like it (or maybe I should stick to business writing, right?):
http://my.iciba.com/blog-2359574-160686.html
"Love between a younger boy and an older girl is like, well, the forbidden fruit – it’s somewhat tabooed yet electrifying when it comes to pass.
She never would have thought she could ever fall in love with a boy two years her junior, and yet fate has a way with the unthinkable.
He is as pure as the first dew of a spring dawn – so innocent, so lovely, and yet so fragile.
And when they hold hands and gaze into each other’s eyes, it seems the whole world is frozen in time like nothing else exists except the two of them struggling to perpetuate that enchanting moment into an eternity.
When they are together, she hates herself for betraying her own principle in seeking a younger lover. Yet when they are apart, she can think of nothing else except his sparkling eyes, sweet smiles and soft words.
It doesn’t matter if tomorrow holds no promises, and all that matters is the precious moments they share together."
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I love your words.I feel very comfortable in it.
回复：thanks!
沙发 Date:2008-11-10 15:53:11
you wrote it more romantic!
回复：I'm so glad u did not get mad at my intrusiveness, thnx!
板凳 Date:2008-11-10 16:41:13
they will never forget each other!
回复：hope I can describe one-thousandth of how they feel!
4 楼 Date:2008-11-10 16:46:18
Thanks！Welcome
回复：thnx!
5 楼 Date:2008-11-10 19:59:24
Both business and Non-business writing are welcomed!
We can learn a lots from your articles.
While coule you make the characters a little bigger? The small characters make my worse eyesight even worse.
We can learn a lots from your articles.
While coule you make the characters a little bigger? The small characters make my worse eyesight even worse.
回复：Sorry, it's a system situation, maybe u can transfer it to a Word document and use a bigger font, apologize for the inconvenience!
6 楼 Date:2008-11-10 20:58:33
"I stumbled into this lovely article at the following thread."
"It doesn't matter if tomorrow holds no promises, and all that matters is the precious moments they share together."
"It doesn't matter if tomorrow holds no promises, and all that matters is the precious moments they share together."
回复：thnx!
7 楼 Date:2008-11-10 21:13:50
Remember, Master shifu, both business and non-business writing are welcomed. You will win surport from us.
回复：thnx
8 楼 Date:2008-11-12 20:26:11
you had done well with non_business writting!could I add u as my friend pls? coz I hope to read ur article everyday!
回复：sure, it'll be an honor
9 楼 Date:2008-11-14 09:23:33
Normally we regards the payment for water source as a kind of principal.But when you live in the desert, the life become the critical . Love is the same, no frame, only feeling.
Enjoy your article, and hope for more.
Enjoy your article, and hope for more.
回复：thnx!
10 楼 Date:2008-11-18 11:23:02
When love come ,should not be shy!
回复：wow, u sound like a veteran in the game of love, isn't it?
11 楼 Date:2008-11-18 19:11:07
A smart writer!
回复：thnx!
12 楼 Date:2008-11-19 17:37:13
I think you'd better stick to business proposal writing. LOL... Not too bad in fact, but it's just not like your usual self.
回复：I am certain mine is better than a lot of others kicking around. Actually many books I read have been dramas with a lot of lovey-dovey stuff. Hey, those translations are mushy stuff too, right? Alex
13 楼 Date:2009-06-29 15:11:53
I would think making up your own story and translating other's work are two different things.
回复：translation is the means, writing your own stuff is the end Alex
14 楼 Date:2009-06-30 23:46:23
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