cherrycjb
Er~~~~ where to begin ......
Cherry, The girl who was a menace to me in iciba and who i know her less.
She urge me to write something about her sensitivity and beauty.
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actually, i can get nothing in my head. i think someone of there should be agree with me.
For Friend, It's true that we can not always choose all of our companions. some are thrust upon us by business and the social relations of life. We do not choose them, we do not enjoy them, and yet, we have to associate with them more or less. So, i just wanna tell you that you are not above of them. ok. i have to stop, i'm afraid you will escape form wedding.
In the end, i wish you : happy newly-married !
Cherry, The girl who was a menace to me in iciba and who i know her less.
She urge me to write something about her sensitivity and beauty.
...
...
.....
actually, i can get nothing in my head. i think someone of there should be agree with me.
For Friend, It's true that we can not always choose all of our companions. some are thrust upon us by business and the social relations of life. We do not choose them, we do not enjoy them, and yet, we have to associate with them more or less. So, i just wanna tell you that you are not above of them. ok. i have to stop, i'm afraid you will escape form wedding.
In the end, i wish you : happy newly-married !
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沙发 Date:2008-06-27 19:59:49
我也来了 怎么办挖?

板凳 Date:2008-06-27 20:09:05
You must pay for our feeling of happy!BOY!

Just a kidding!

Just a kidding!
4 楼 Date:2008-06-28 09:13:46
JH 来了。。。请坐, 要喝茶吗? 

5 楼 Date:2008-06-28 15:20:01
zhangxiu , hey ,it's you again。 how are you doing. 

6 楼 Date:2008-06-28 15:22:11
ok. i have to stop, i'm afraid you will escape form wedding. 





7 楼 Date:2008-06-28 16:21:25
As a matter of fact,I know you little. So I have nothing to say, but I think you are a real self-lover. And you should realize it.
Who are you?.................... I don't know why you have so much dissent from me.
Who are you?.................... I don't know why you have so much dissent from me.
8 楼 Date:2008-06-28 16:33:08
You should be responsible for what you have said. I find you are really so intrested in my wedding. What's your motives? And I think it has noting to do with you. You are really a outsider. You are nothing. 

9 楼 Date:2008-06-28 16:41:12
In the end, I must tell you what you have writed above has so much mistake in grammar. You have a long way to go. You must study hard to impove your written English. Wish you find your the other half in the near future.
10 楼 Date:2008-06-28 16:46:38
...... 
firstly : This essay is not my idea, i do this because of you let me write.
secondly: The wedding, That is all i know about you. and there was something you should heed: it doesn't intrest me where or when or whom you will married with

firstly : This essay is not my idea, i do this because of you let me write.
secondly: The wedding, That is all i know about you. and there was something you should heed: it doesn't intrest me where or when or whom you will married with
11 楼 Date:2008-06-29 18:51:46
thirdly : "ok. i have to stop, i'm afraid you will escape form wedding." hey, lady, that was a kidding. Don't give me a serious look please !!!
12 楼 Date:2008-06-29 18:55:31
fourthly : Thank you so much for you advice in my english. But please don't stop on say, i really appreciate who will show me the error and tell me why.
13 楼 Date:2008-06-29 19:06:29
ps: self-lover, You suit the qualifications more than me.

14 楼 Date:2008-06-29 19:11:15
firstly : This essay is not my idea, i do this because of you let me write.
This essay is not from my idea,I do it because you let me write it.
because of 后面一般不跟从句的,呵呵
This essay is not from my idea,I do it because you let me write it.
because of 后面一般不跟从句的,呵呵
15 楼 Date:2008-06-29 20:18:28
secondly: The wedding, That is all i know about you. and there was something you should heed: it doesn't intrest me where or when or whom you will married with
时态混乱,一会儿过去式,一会儿一般现在式。还有,will 后面应该跟动词原形的,o(∩_∩)o...
时态混乱,一会儿过去式,一会儿一般现在式。还有,will 后面应该跟动词原形的,o(∩_∩)o...
16 楼 Date:2008-06-29 20:21:55
hey, lady, that was a kidding. Don't give me a serious look please !!!
这样表达更地道:It was just a kidding. Please don't take it seriously.哈哈
这样表达更地道:It was just a kidding. Please don't take it seriously.哈哈
17 楼 Date:2008-06-29 20:25:25
Thank you so much for you advice in my english. But please don't stop on say, i really appreciate who will show me the error and tell me why.
Thank you so much for your advice in my English. And I will be very happy if someone can show me the error and
Thank you so much for your advice in my English. And I will be very happy if someone can show me the error and
18 楼 Date:2008-06-29 20:28:30
tell me why.
19 楼 Date:2008-06-29 20:28:47
Self-lover is the special word for you. And it suit you very much.
hehe.
hehe.
20 楼 Date:2008-06-29 20:31:56
In the end, you should reward my help in your written English. Please give me some points in return,o(∩_∩)o...哈哈

21 楼 Date:2008-06-29 20:34:57
well, because of 后接名词 或名词短语。 because 后接从句。
的确我疏忽了。
的确我疏忽了。
22 楼 Date:2008-06-29 21:14:18
我就不一一回复了,整体看过后,的确, 或许某个词的时态上没注意到,但是我不认同你说的,为什么一定要按你的逻辑去表述了? 语言的美妙就是一句话可以用不同的方式去诠释。 你的太死板了。
还有你也太偏心了,之前说上边那篇语法错的厉害,却又偏偏有针对我的回答
还有你也太偏心了,之前说上边那篇语法错的厉害,却又偏偏有针对我的回答
23 楼 Date:2008-06-29 21:32:13
你写的不能叫做美妙,错就是错要勇于承认错误,不要找太多的理由
你写的让外国人看都看不懂,也就是中国人可以理解你写的是什么
既然你不同意我的说法,以后我也不用再给你提什么意见了
24 楼 Date:2008-06-29 21:49:15
你知道吗,给你批改作业真的很难
25 楼 Date:2008-06-29 21:50:39








26 楼 Date:2008-06-29 21:51:12
的确很难, 因为没什么错可以给你找到。 

27 楼 Date:2008-06-30 18:51:51
不服,你要让我服了,我就没话说。。。

28 楼 Date:2008-06-30 18:52:43
come here to reading your english actcile,it is usefull for me,thankyou.
29 楼 Date:2008-07-01 14:15:32


HOHO~~~fanny~~~
30 楼 Date:2008-07-01 14:19:22
long time no come ,lazy boy come on and good luck
31 楼 Date:2008-07-02 03:26:53
HAHA!Roy!It`s interesting of your dialog with cherrycjb.
You meet a rival of strong . But pls don`t worry about it due to I believe that you have the ability to becoming more strong.

You meet a rival of strong . But pls don`t worry about it due to I believe that you have the ability to becoming more strong.

32 楼 Date:2008-07-03 22:06:07
Oh god!
i can't get your meaning from the article.......
maybe i should pay more attention to my English....
i can't get your meaning from the article.......

maybe i should pay more attention to my English....
33 楼 Date:2008-07-05 08:53:04
So interesting ! ^_^
34 楼 Date:2008-07-20 00:29:32





















