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welcome my friend

时间:2008-07-18 20:15 | 分类:个人日记 -
  This is my first issue in Iciba.com. And I will write something for my  ordinary life now and then from now on with the purpose to improving myself.
   So I welcome you (my friend) to point out my unproper expression.
   
   
  
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em09.gifCome On!
   沙发 Date:2008-07-18 20:27:46
  
  
Thank you for your encouragement. I am also live and work in DG. Nice to see you!
   板凳 Date:2008-07-19 10:06:55
  
  
Go ahead. You will make it.
   4 Date:2008-07-23 20:37:28
  
  
What were you going to express by using the "issue" here?
What I think the ......from now on for the purpose of improving...... is better. What do you think?
It should be improper instead of unproper in the last sentence.
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   5 Date:2008-07-23 20:46:29
  
    
 
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