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Bad day
Today was bad day. Bad weather and bad temper. In this situation, I wanna to did nothing.
During the class,I just looked at the leafage of the trees outside the window. My eyes were filled with green, This feeling was very comfortable just like taking a walk in the forest.
Suddenly I found something about myself,I have been lacking goal.Thus, my chievement of study had not abtained progress.Day after day,my confidence have suffered large shock.That is a big trouble for me. So, I must search object quickly.
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Bad day
Today was bad day. Bad weather and bad temper. In this situation, I wanna to did nothing.
During the class,I just looked at the leafage of the trees outside the window. My eyes were filled with green, This feeling was very comfortable just like taking a walk in the forest.
Suddenly I found something about myself,I have been lacking goal.Thus, my chievement of study had not abtained progress.Day after day,my confidence have suffered large shock.That is a big trouble for me. So, I must search object quickly.
本帖从爱词霸沙龙发送，原地址：http://sl.iciba.com/viewthread-95-610704-1.shtml
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